Monday, March 12, 2007

Hey Everyone

Hello to anyone whos around, I have been quite busy for a while with work and will be for some time in the future. I hoped I would be able to continue blogging regularly but it seems that isn't quite possible I dont have the time to blog, or comment on blogs of friends. I do read the ones I have been following for a while when I get the time. So I guess posts on this blog will be very rare if any. I'll leave you with a complete poem of which I had posted the ending a few days back (I did say it was long) . Take care everyone.


My Tears
Is it every seekers state
To suffer silently pine away
Hoping for what could be
While fearing what is today?
Yes things are never ever
The way they ought to be
And this is where it starts
All the heart ache that we see !

Is it our fate to live
In hopes of better days to come
When justice ,truth and rights prevail
And all to love and care succumb?
And yet come see where it all ends
Mans progress a merry go round
As seeking truth but pain protends
And pain and suffering hatreds found !

Is it our plight to never grow
Into the beings we can be
With truth,love and grace aglow
Happy, helpful ,content ,carefree.
For laden brows with devious mind At each step collide
With truths that hearts seek to find !

Is it our destiny to remain
Blundering barbaric blustering beasts
Swooning over songs society sings
Of love and rights and moral things
As madly materialistic men manage
To delay progress - cause drastic damage?
Oh nothing differs in this deadly game
Things for ever remain the same!

It is my right to hug this pain
As agonizing between myself and me
The mind gives up the chase in vain
And forlorn chains of many a thought
Seek refuge in a pulsating orb
And in that dungeon of the soul
By some mysterious alchemy
Pain is born,heart ache begot.

Mute silence as the storm builds up
Blood rushes to heart in feverish pitch
Thunder echos through the soul
As clouds of gloom they weigh it down
The heart consumes I clearly see
Every fibre of my soul and me
That’s when the pain begins to grow
And yes the tears begin to flow.

And flowing down my face as rain
Nourish the seeds of what I seek
Too often for it to be mere chance
They dim the lights before I dance
Cool the anguish of my soul
Renew the zest for my advance.
Though they make me look so weak
They are the spurs to all I seek !

36 comments:

ArabLady said...

good 4 u !

Enyur said...

Good one! Well, I hope you come back soon and post more poems.

goodie girl said...

D Reb - Fantastic alliteration in the third (?) stanza. I must have an autographed copy of your first book of poetry. :) Hope to see you blogging again soon, I really enjoy reading your posts.
gg

goodie girl said...

Fourth! Oops. :)

Radha said...

DR, thats very well written...although i dont agree with your sentiments (is it our destiny to remain beasts?)

And hope you keep blogging as frequently and as poetically !

Shaykhspeara Sha'ira said...

Ah we get to read the full thing, beautiful.

I know you are busy and all but I hope we will still see you on Global Themes ey? You are much needed there!

EXSENO said...

I hope you don't leave completely. Find the time to blog at least once in a while. Your blog is so worth keeping.
Once again another wonderful poem. It's not to long either, it has a lot to say.
Your beautiful writings will be missed.

Destitute Rebel said...

@ Arablady, thanks for stopping by.

@ Enyur, Thanks I'll try and post whenever I can.

@Goodie Girl and Radha, seems the forth stanza got both your attention. Radha of course you have a right to disagree but I feel that in essence we are beasts(Barbaric) and it doesn't seem to be changing at all.

@ Shaira, thanks, dont worry you wont miss me on Global Themes.Its a great project, I'll be there as much as I can.

@exseno, Thanks for your kind words, I will post whenever I can its just I dont have the energy to blog regularly anymore.

sidrah said...

loves especially the third stanze and the lines:

"And forlorn chains of many a thought
Seek refuge in a pulsating orb
And in that dungeon of the soul"

bohaat alaa, jii

Bee Amma said...

first of all i am so sorry for not visiting your blog as much as i should be. Been busy recently and just not managed to comment anywhere:(

Love the poem, yaar kitaaab chupwaow please!

Destitute Rebel said...

@sidrah, Thanks.

@Bee Amma, don't worry about it, we'r all busy. book ka koi program nahi, im done with writing for now atleast.

Boo! said...

i guess i should dish out a compliment or two as well now that i am here and have actually read the poem (at least in parts)...

compliment... two...

wish you luck with whatever you are busy with!

nuh ibn zbigniew gondek said...

As salaam alaikum.

Nice poem. I write a little too. Come by insha'Allah when you have a little time.

Wa salaama,

nuh ibn

kaya said...

Ki haal hai Munda. I see tussi hond bhi Pareshaan ho.
Koi gull nahi. Kabhi AD to aao. coffee shoffee ?
BTW on my Blogg roll why am I not getting GLOBAL THEMES?
Did u guys chuck me out?

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Destitute Rebel said...

Kaya Aunty, Hum kabhi aisi gustakhi ker saktey hain. Must have been some error,2-3 people got chucked when we migrated to the new blogger, maybe it was then. I sent you another invite.

Radha said...

You really are busy!
Time for a new post!

goodie girl said...

D Reb, just wanted to say hello. Looks like you are still Buuusssy. :) Me too. I hope you are taking a little time for yourself. :)

gg

Destitute Rebel said...

Hey Radha, been veddy veddy busy. Will remain busy,plus nothing worth posting, hope to see you around the blog scene.

Hey GG, how you been. Busy is an understatement if there are 24 hours in a day im busy 30 of them, lol. so how do you suggest I find time for myself.

i*maginate said...

Hello... 2 deep for a Wed eve ;)

Shaykhspeara Sha'ira said...

I reckon it's time to come back to blogging, don't you? You been fairly absent over at GT as well? Sub theek hai?

Destitute Rebel said...

I*magibate, yes it is deep. Thanks for stopping by.

Shaira, I'v been really stressed with work and stuff, I'll get to GT this weekend and see if I can get back to this.

Bee Amma said...

waaaaaaapis aow!

Princess said...

ur the best!

Destitute Rebel said...

Hey Princess, Thanks, Again its an honor to be in the presence of royalty.

Destitute Rebel said...

Dr Bongi, I'm around just too busy and drained. thanks for stopping by.

ArabLady said...

passing by to say Hi

Radha said...

Hey, how r things? Still busy at work?

Destitute Rebel said...

Arab lady, Hi :-) hope all is well with you.

Radha, thanks for stopping by again, it seems life has become busy and the future will be nothing but busy, so I'v sort of signed off from this blog.

BuJ said...

hey dude.. how's it going?

david santos said...
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sidrah said...

tsk tsk, total houdini act :(

helios said...
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Miss Specs said...

WoW...there are ACTS posting on this blog. Jeez.

You've been writing excellent stuff for a long long time. Please, don't deprive us of this joy of reading a new poem now and then, comeon. A blog doesn't really mean it has to be a DAILY log. Once a blue moon is fine with us if you keep on posting poems :)

Good Luck to you in all your endeavours.

Miss Specs said...

Sorry i meant ACTS posting COMMENTS on this blog. Whooops! :$

Destitute Rebel said...

Hi buj, things have been good and busy, thanks for stopping by.

Sidrah, did'nt houdini perish in one of his dissapearing acts? I had a lot on my plate and I will be coming back soon.

Miss Specs, welcome to the blog, thanks for stopping by, iv been quite busy but should be getting back on track soon.